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Creative Writing

Kia ora bloggers,

in my class we’ve been doing creative writing, about a topic of your choice. I did one about McDonalds and their is the other part to it on my blog 2 or 3 posts ago so check that post out so this writing makes more sense.

The image is a bit blurry, so I’ll be adding the text right under here :

Once I got down into the foam pit I was never seen back out. My friends were still waiting and waiting for me to come out. Thinking I was playing a prank on them. 

“You there?” My friends shouted.

There was no response and they were quiet for 5 minutes just standing still. I felt a hand on my leg pull me down even further. I went down a dark slide screaming my lungs out wondering where I was going. I was found in a huge maze with another person who I had never seen before.

“Hello?” Who are you?” The little voice said.

“Hi” What are you doing here too?” I asked 

“I’ve been stuck here for over a year” Replied the person.

“How?” I asked curiously.

It turns out they were one of the missing kids, we both looked around in the maze together trying to find the way out. The further we got into the maze the more missing kids we saw. 

Do you like McDonalds?

Blog you later,

Khadijah.

Creative Writing ( McDonalds )

✨ :: Kia ora bloggers! For the past week my class has been doing creative writing daily for 30 minutes in the morning, I wrote about McDonalds yesterday and the Grimace today. I will be posting my McDonalds creative writing.

I think its one of my favourite writing pieces because 1 we got to choose what we want to write about, 2, its McDonalds, and 3 I think it really focuses on my main goals in writing, and what I’ve been focusing on in class. ( Dialogue, descriptive language, correct puncuation when using dialogue etc ) 

Heres the photo of my writing, it is a bit blurry though so I’ll be adding the text if you can’t read it correctly.

McDonalds! Everyone likes McDonalds right? But you wont like this one.. Everyone loved this McDonalds for having a big play house with a HUGE pit full with cubes of foam ( the ones you may have seen at Jump ) But stories have told that on the average 100 kids go missing every year from this foam pit. So me and my friends thought it was a good idea to go to the McDonalds.

 Once we got their it looked pretty messed up. The sign was broken and it was covered in dust. We went inside and went straight to the play area, at first glance it didnt look very deep, but when you go inside its like your drowning in foam, which I did not want that to be the way I drown. I wanted to go in first because I thought it would be pretty fun, but no. When you first go in its pretty comfortable, then the foam starts bringing you down, going all the way down to the bottom of the foam pit and going even further. It dosen’t exactly have a name but I’ll just call it the backrooms. 

It is a bit un finished, as we only had 30 minutes but I think its okay for 30 minutes, and i’m proud of this piece of writing.

Do you love McDonalds? ( To see my other posts its https://odskhadijahm.edublogs.org/ )  

Blog you later, Khadijah :: ⭐