Creative Writing ( McDonalds )

✨ :: Kia ora bloggers! For the past week my class has been doing creative writing daily for 30 minutes in the morning, I wrote about McDonalds yesterday and the Grimace today. I will be posting my McDonalds creative writing.

I think its one of my favourite writing pieces because 1 we got to choose what we want to write about, 2, its McDonalds, and 3 I think it really focuses on my main goals in writing, and what I’ve been focusing on in class. ( Dialogue, descriptive language, correct puncuation when using dialogue etc ) 

Heres the photo of my writing, it is a bit blurry though so I’ll be adding the text if you can’t read it correctly.

McDonalds! Everyone likes McDonalds right? But you wont like this one.. Everyone loved this McDonalds for having a big play house with a HUGE pit full with cubes of foam ( the ones you may have seen at Jump ) But stories have told that on the average 100 kids go missing every year from this foam pit. So me and my friends thought it was a good idea to go to the McDonalds.

 Once we got their it looked pretty messed up. The sign was broken and it was covered in dust. We went inside and went straight to the play area, at first glance it didnt look very deep, but when you go inside its like your drowning in foam, which I did not want that to be the way I drown. I wanted to go in first because I thought it would be pretty fun, but no. When you first go in its pretty comfortable, then the foam starts bringing you down, going all the way down to the bottom of the foam pit and going even further. It dosen’t exactly have a name but I’ll just call it the backrooms. 

It is a bit un finished, as we only had 30 minutes but I think its okay for 30 minutes, and i’m proud of this piece of writing.

Do you love McDonalds? ( To see my other posts its https://odskhadijahm.edublogs.org/ )  

Blog you later, Khadijah :: ⭐