Kia ora bloggers,
This is my show not tell of my 2023 highlight ( Pt Erin ) I didn’t know exactly what to write so some of this is not show not tell . 🤣
As we exited the steaming pool, my nose turned red and I quickly raced to get my warm towel. Loudly, we bounced on the small trampolines, unexpectedly slipping every second. As high as a kangaroo we jumped high.
Please give me feedback on this writing ( despite not using show not tell )
Khadijah.